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    Realistic Sketches

    Post  Breezy on Thu Apr 29, 2010 12:11 am

    Hey everyone!
    I'm working on a story calles 'Realistic Sketches'.
    I'm writing it on my mobile, but it got snatched by my geo teacher this friday and I still don't have it back. As soon as I have it back I will finish it. It could be my last project I'm working on, but I'm not sure. I'll put the storyline up as soon as possible.

    To keep you people sweet for now:
    The sky is blue. The wind is like a rhythm that strikes along his cheek. His eyes are pointed at piece of wood that will be destroyed soon. Tough it gives him a bad feeling for some reason, he can't stop looking at it. The sword in his hand is as light as a fear. It feels like it could be blown away anytime. He's holding it loose, the point of a deadly katana is buried in the grass, like a little rabbit. Suddenly his whole body tense, every muscle is working.A sharp look. His hand pulls up the katana automatically. He breathes. His hart bounces. He closes his eyes. Focus. Be one with the sword. Feel the sword, be the sword. A deep breath. He bows his knees. The grass is dancing with the wind. He waits. He waits for the right moment. A gold-brown leave flutters down. As soon as the leave hits the ground, all his tension leaves his body in a jump. At the highest point he raises his sword. The sharp ending shines in the fell sunlight. His sandals feel like he's able to fly with them. When he almost hits the floor, a quick strike hits a piece the wood. It cuts right trough the middle of it. It bursts open and splinters are flying all over. The sword hits the stump where the piece of wood takes places on. The two halves fall over, and one falls in the weat grass. In a tenth of a second he puts his blade in its cover. He strokes his hand along the piece of wood and says: 'I'm so sorry.'

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    Re: Realistic Sketches

    Post  Power on Fri Apr 30, 2010 1:03 pm

    Sounds pretty cool. Can you give us a preview?

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    Re: Realistic Sketches

    Post  Breezy on Mon May 03, 2010 9:52 pm

    Power wrote:Sounds pretty cool. Can you give us a preview?
    Preview is in mah phone, wich my geo teache has stolen... (biutch...)


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    Re: Realistic Sketches

    Post  Breezy on Tue May 04, 2010 11:34 pm

    UPDATE EVERYONE!!! I REALEASED A LITTLE STORY I WROTE IN 10 MINUTES!!! Okay let's stop with the caption... Well, just read...


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