youtube feedback please.. im new

youtube name is BABYpuncher93, just joined and i didn't really got much feedback on my first pivot. if anyone has any free time can u watch my pivot and just give me some pointers or feedback id really appreciate it.
thank you



- oh and i'll apologize in advance for no audio on the video, i just started doing things on the computer and im not that informed on how to add alot to youtube.

It's very good for a first Pivot. But for this long animation, you should write a storyline before you make the animation. Also, go to other forums to watch walk tuts. Welcome ayways.